Offense taken

I just can't understand how so many people can so calmly accept the media's continued use of blatently sexist and homophobic language. Today's example is a piece by business columnist Al Lewis in The Denver Post. The column, which poked fun at Douglas Bruce, a Colorado legislator who has since been censured for kicking a Rocky Mountain News photographer, had the following headline:

Girlyman Bruce deserves the boot

The headline writer got the word "girlyman" from the column, in which Lewis refers to Bruce as "a girlyman who kicks and won't say he's sorry."

As if that wasn't bad enough, the lead (or introduction) of the story reads as follows:

Douglas Bruce kicks like a little girl.

Later in the column, Lewis asks of Bruce:

"What's he going to do next? Bite? Pinch? Pull hair?

How do I hate this? Let me count the ways, term by sexist term.

First, saying someone "kicks like a girl" sounds like something I used to hear when I was young, 30 years ago. Whenever somebody tried to put down another kid by saying he "threw like a girl," I got upset, probably because I was a girl who could throw better than most boys. But seriously, the use of this put-down only serves to reinforce the tired stereotype that girls are not meant to be athletes.

Second, my 2-year-old son bites and kicks. So why not call Bruce a 2-year-old or a toddler? Or as one of my editing students suggested, why not say he had a temper tantrum. Or better yet, why not say he kicks like a little boy? Now that would be a breakthrough.

Third, the term "girlyman" is not just a tired remnant of an old "Saturday Night Live" skit. And it's not just a reference to California Gov. Arnold Schwarzenegger's ridiculously self-mocking repetition of the term. It is a slap in the face to women and gay men. What is wrong with being "girly"? What's wrong with being a girl? Apparently there's something wrong with it, or else people wouldn't feel the need to use feminizing terms as put-downs.

Probably the worst thing you can say about a man is that he is not manly. And what are the most unmanly things out there? Girls and gay men. So there you go. You hear it on the playground. And from what I've been told, you hear it from college students. And I know you hear it in bars and professional settings and even family dinner tables. That's the problem.

Interestingly enough, when I contacted Al Lewis about this, here's what he told me:

I wanted to take this issue down to the pre-school level where it belongs.

I guess he did. But is that really the way to go? When a columnist for a large metro daily newspaper uses sexist language, he's simply reinforcing what's said on the playground and in the dorm room and in the bar. I try to teach my students that as journalists -- whether in public relations, advertising or news -- they have the power to tell people what's important. And that power carries with it a responsibility. How can I teach my students to be responsible when professionals break all the rules? But then again, I also teach my students to ask follow-up questions, follow AP style and write concisely. Most professional journalists don't follow those rules, either.

But this problem is bigger than journalism. The problem is a society where offensive language is ignored and sexism and homophobia are tolerated. One example of this is the fact that my students almost unanimously agreed that Lewis had every right to use these words. These are journalism students in a junior-level editing class. Some said that the author was going for effect. Yes, that's true. But as other students countered, he could have gotten the effect with other words. Some reasoned that because it was a column, Lewis had the right to say whatever he wanted. That's true. They also agreed that if it had been a news story, the editor would have the right to change the wording.

But here's my take: Shouldn't a columnist, who gets to share his opinions with the world for a living, be held to a higher standard? Just because something isn't against the law does not mean it's OK to do. And just because a professional writer does it doesn't mean you should follow along like a sheep.

I guess it comes down to your own ethical values. I'm no ethics expert, but I do know that I wouldn't want to hear my son using the words Lewis used in his column.

I wasn't the only reader offended by the column. You can read some interesting comments about the column, and see Lewis' take, at his blog.

And I'd love to see your comments on this subject. Thanks for reading.

What a bad ass

Saw the following on a bumper sticker some time ago, and I just can't stop thinking about how much an editing class would have helped the writer.

Bad ass girls
drive bad asstrucks

My old but accurate "Webster's New World Dictionary: Third College Edition," defines a "badass" as "a troublemaker, especially one who is rough, tough, mean, or sometimes, violent." The word is listed as both a noun and an adjective, and both are one word.

I don't think I'll be driving an "asstruck," thank you very much. In fact, that's one vehicle I'd prefer not to see on the road -- ever.

And here's the kicker. The bumper sticker was on the back of a Ford Escort, a car that's always said "troublemaker" to me.

Of this he is correct

Been on vacation. Sorry for the wait.

Any wordies out there who haven't read William Safire's "On Language" column? It runs every Sunday in The New York Times Magazine. I enjoyed Sunday's piece on the word "of." I especially liked the last section, in which the columnist reminds us that "could've" is short for "could have," not "could of." I see the latter all the time in student work. Spell checker won't catch that mistake, people.

Can they get a designated fact-checker?

As promised, here's another post on fact-checking. And it's timely, too. Last night, as I eagerly awaited Game 3 of the World Series in Denver, I was forced to watch the local Fox affiliate's pre-game show. What can I say? I'm a print person, so TV news annoys me.

Whoever was in charge of graphics goofed badly. The lineup for Boston listed David Ortiz as "DH," or designated hitter. Most fans know that the DH is only used in American League ballparks. The game was played at Coors Field, home to the Rockies, a National League team. You'd think the crew at a Denver TV station would know that, wouldn't you? Especially since the lack of a DH in Denver had been debated on sports talk shows and in newspaper columns since Game 2 ended Thursday night. Everyone wanted to weigh in on what Red Sox manager Terry Francona should do about the fact that because there's no DH in Denver, he would have to bench one of his regulars -- either Kevin Youkilis, Mike Lowell or Ortiz. In case you missed it, Ortiz moved from DH to first base, and Youkilis started on the bench. He replaced Ortiz for defensive purposes late in the game.

I think what happened is pretty obvious. The station used the same lineup graphic for games 1, 2 and 3 and forgot to change Ortiz's position from DH to 1B. They made the other changes, so at least they didn't make total fools of themselves.

I see this as another example of journalists not taking informational graphics seriously.

Just the facts, please

It doesn't matter how great the writing is if your facts are incorrect. I tell my students to check the following facts every time they edit a story:
• spelling of names of people, places and institutions;
• dates and details about historic occurrences;
• street addresses, e-mail addresses and Web site addresses;
• phone numbers;
• statistics and years, including doing the math when possible;
• anything that might be libelous (defamatory statements);
• anything that looks fishy.

I've been thinking about fact-checking for a while, but today seemed like a great day to tackle the subject. The World Series began last night, and the local paper, the Greeley Tribune, made Game 1 the lead story on the front page. The layout was excellent, with a four-column photo of Matt Holliday reacting after striking out and a smaller shot of Dustin Pedroia smacking a home run in his first Series at-bat. The layout looked really nice, but the copy contained the following error.

"Red Sox leadoff hitter Dustin Pedroia hit the second pitch he saw over the Green Monster."

No, he did not. Anyone who saw the game could tell you that Pedroia's homer hit the very top of the wall in left field, which is known as the "Green Monster," and fell back into the field of play. Because the ball hit the very top of the the wall, it was ruled a home run correctly by the umpire.

Someone from the sports desk should have caught that mistake. When I worked on the sports desk at the Connecticut Post, whenever a sports story ran on the front page of the paper, a sports copy editor was asked to read it to make sure things like this did not happen. The Tribune might want to start this practice.

One last thing about fact-checking. Students sometimes complain that a factual error results in an automatic F. I tell them it's better than losing your job. I was in the newsroom the night a reporter made a factual error in the score of a baseball game. I was also in the newsroom the next day, when he was fired for his error. Yes, it's that important.

Because facts are so significant in news, I'm going to discuss this issue again in my next post. Stay tuned.

The cranky TV sports critic

I found someone almost as cranky as me. I know, I know. You can't believe it either. But you will after reading Richard Sandomir's rant on TBS' "coverage" of the Yankees-Indians American League Divisional Series. I'd hate to have him for a teacher.

UNC's loss is journalism's loss

Justin Steffen, my former student, died last week. He was only 22, but he was already a journalist making a difference.

Justin, pictured at right, graduated in May with majors in journalism and psychology. During his last semester at UNC, he took my Advanced News & Feature Writing class, the capstone course for all students emphasizing in news-editorial, or what we used to refer to as print journalism.

As part of the class, students are required to cover a beat. Justin chose to cover the Boys and Girls Clubs of Weld County. His investigative article examined how the club had canceled a popular prevention program. I really liked his lead on the story, which was published on the Greeley Tribune's Web site:

Anthony Montelongo is a 12-year-old Greeley resident. He has been a member of the Boys and Girls Club’s Painter Unit for about eight years. Until recently, he was also a member of the SMART (Skills Mastery And Resistance Training) Moves program. Montelongo said that the program has taught him not to do drugs and to respect other people. He also said that he thinks that all the other children should participate in the program.
“SMART Moves is fun. There are a lot of kids in it and it teaches you a lot,” Montelongo said. He said it should be one of the highest priorities for the club to get the program back.
The SMART Moves program is not being taught at either of the Boys and Girls Club units in Greeley. The reason that the program is not being taught is because of lack of staff to teach the program and lack of money to hire the staff, according to staff at the clubs. The program has not been run in the Painter or Pawl units since March.

I was impressed by Justin's ability to talk to that young man and tell his story. So many journalism students are afraid to tackle tough stories because they're afraid of asking hard questions of people they don't know. But that's journalism. If you want to make a difference, you have to do the hard work. Justin knew that.

Because he did the hard work, his story made a difference. I received an e-mail from Justin about a month after the article appeared on the Tribune's Web site. He said that although the club's director wasn't happy with the publicity, officials had decided to bring back the program. I am proud of what Justin did. We need more reporters like him in newsrooms across the United States.

Thank you Justin, for making a difference in Greeley, and for making a difference in my life.

Read Justin's articles in the Greeley Tribune:

• Local Boys and Girls Clubs drop prevention program
• Opinion: Boys and Girls Clubs need to stay open
• Boys and Girls Club's unit director leaves

Photo credit: Barry Lapoint